Wow!!! I am in total suspense! That was just amazing!!!! What a gifted writer you are!!!! ... Truly amazing!!! This is brilliant! So vivid, i was actually holding my breath through the first erratic actions of Jane’s Dad! Brilliant work!! I am honored to have read the beginning of your story. Very well written, had me holding my breath and by the end I was tearing up. Wow! Thank you. Incredible courage!! and powerful writing. thank you for sharing it! Thank you for sharing my dear. Beautifully and amazingly written.